underwood

Conceptually this is one of my favorite pieces. The arrangement and composition are nicely done. However, the light appears a little too hot. The rear left is washed out from too much direct light coming from the bankers lamp, and this causes a mild "disturbance" in the piece. I wonder what this would look like if you reshot it using a smaller aperture and/or faster shutter speed with maybe a black cloth suspended above to prevent reflected light from the ceiling.

But seriously, this is an awesome shot.